My Zeal

I didn't know I could feel
Or open my soul and reveal
All these emotions, so real
To you, my fire, my zeal. 

If only I could rewind this reel
And relive our moments, so surreal
As these words onto your lips, I seal,
And you, for eternity, away I steal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Deo Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 2:20 AM
Judy, he must be great to write so well about! And the rhymes are simple, unforced, and effective. Keep writing or WRITE ON, right?
Varghese Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment. I'm just an amateur, will try my best! Thank you!
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