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My Zeal

I didn't know I could feel Or open my soul and reveal All these emotions, so real To you, my fire, my zeal. If only I could rewind this reel And relive our moments, so surreal As these words onto your lips, I seal, And you, for eternity, away I steal.

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Date: 5/25/2020 2:20:00 AM
Judy, he must be great to write so well about! And the rhymes are simple, unforced, and effective. Keep writing or WRITE ON, right?
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Judy Ann Varghese
Date: 5/27/2020 2:50:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment. I'm just an amateur, will try my best! Thank you!

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