My World

I like living in my own little world I'm happy there it's okay. It's much more fun than the real one for everydays an holiday. It's a world without hate or sorrow a world where everyone's free a world of love and harmony a world of peace and tranquillity. I know my world's not the real one it's my world of make believe. But it's the world I often visit if only in my dreams.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/18/2025 1:00:00 AM

I wish your kind of world could by magic become true - just imagine, but man's greed will somehow, somewhere seep in or rear its ugly head - UTOPIA WOULD BE IDEAL - who knows, the world is being pounded right now, so maybe a surprise like the way you live could become a reality. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:08:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, it will never happen but we can still dream, sending you my love and best wishes God bless. xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/17/2025 6:13:00 AM

John, thanks for dreaming! A worthy place to visit since comparison helps us understand what we're working for. Smiles!!

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Duke, for your visit and welcoming comment, have a lovely day.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/16/2025 5:27:00 PM

This should be a POTD ! John. I cannot make it one! But I will make it a FAV. You have been understanding and knd to me, alays. Thank you. Gracias, Pangie xx

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Pangie, you making it your favourite is far bbetter than POTD, God bless you. xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/16/2025 2:34:00 PM

I Love "My World" write. Dreams can take us there until we get to heaven. Hooray!!! Have a very blessed day/week ahead writing away...............

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:04:00 AM

Hi Paula, it's dreams that keep us going, have a lovely day God bless. xx

Karen Jones

Date: 3/14/2025 11:44:00 PM

Perhaps it is make believe. But if you can believe it maybe you can help us achieve it! It starts with an idea right? I’m a romantic! Hugs enjoyed your world day T is better than this one!

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Karen, maybe if everyone thought the same way it could happen. xx

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/14/2025 6:42:00 PM

Ah! a world without hate or sorrow, divine thought dear poet.

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:02:00 AM

Hi thriveni sadly it's never going to happen, thank you for your visit and comment.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/12/2025 8:40:00 PM

Thank God for make believe, blessed are those of us who have healthy, active imaginations. I love your little write and concur, concur, concur. CayCay

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:01:00 AM

Thank you CayCay, also a healthy imagination helps with the poetry. xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2025 2:23:00 PM

My little world is with hubbie and my TV shows . Then I go on FB and see the craziness out in the real world . Home is the best if there is peace in it. That's for sure.

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 10:00:00 AM

I agree with you Andrea there's no better place than home with the one you love.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/9/2025 9:26:00 AM

You live in a wonderful world. Very original. But that's poetry in a way.

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Victor most of my loved ones have passed on so it's a world I often visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2025 12:20:00 PM

- A lovely place to live... keep your door open to your friends so you don't get lonely - Have a lovely weekend, John :) - hugs

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:57:00 AM

Hi Anne, I will do your welcome anytime. xx

Ink Empress

Date: 3/7/2025 10:17:00 PM

Beautiful world and beautiful dream dear john, one that many long for , peace away from chaos. I love how youv ended the poem and also how youv described this place with no hate or sorrow… if only… pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Ink for your visit and welcoming comment.

Deb M

Date: 3/7/2025 8:53:00 AM

Sounds absolutely delightful John....a wonderful happy and safe world! Lovely poem! Debx

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Deb it sure beats the real world lol. xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/7/2025 7:37:00 AM

Hello John, What a delightful escape! I love how you celebrate the joy of imagination and the peace found in a personal paradise. It’s a beautiful poem to cherish our dreams and the worlds we create! Amen! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Daniel for your heartwarming comment God bless you.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/6/2025 5:00:00 PM

Brother John, it seems to be a wonderful world you live in, even though it’s a make-believe place, somewhere very precious, without greed or hate, wonderful… Sis Beryl

John Read
Date: 4/13/2025 9:52:00 AM

It sure beats the real world sister Beryl.