My World

I close my eyes and my world is so beautiful filled with happy, loving people full of jobs and security no one ever goes hungry I want to keep my eyes closed forever, but instead I open them to a trashy unkept America filled with anger, hateful people full of unemployment and laziness some people go hungry, because they can't afford food and i just want to close my eyes again to envision "my world"

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Clifford Villalon

Date: 3/23/2023 8:48:00 AM

You see the world as a reality. You see everything around you with a clean heart and a clear mind. Though not all things around are in harmony. Your soul speaks a lot about yourself! I'm privileged to meet you on this site, Miss Karen! :) Cliff Your "red sky" poem is relieving!

Karen Croft
Date: 3/24/2023 6:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your comment. I read your vogon poem, but I couldn't reply for some reason. It was a very good poem. I love horror movies and they draw me in with the mystery and suspense. Thanks for a great read!