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Another Collum Lune tanka (thank Sara Kendrick)

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After trigger finger surgery. Thankfully my leg has been so much better, after two years,

May God bless the bodies of my aging friends.

My Working Parts

my working parts fingering is just the start on the march knees and legs take part head and heart, with soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 4:56 PM
delighted the surgery went well for you....sending hugs, SAra
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 4:30 AM
Thank you ❤️
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 8:11 PM
As long as the head, heart and soul are intact, what else can we ask for? :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Wholeness, we hope for - shalom. Thank you, my friend ⭐
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 7:17 AM
So happy it went well. My mom has trigger finger and the first surgery went well. The second with a new Dr did not go well. Sending healing vibes with prayers for your recovery.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Yikes! And then I had wicked constipation for 2 days…thought I was headed for the ER!
Hind Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:31 PM
I am relieved you made it through. I would really miss you if you weren't here. God bless your heart and body- 🌹
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 3:03 PM
Aww…and I would miss you too. 🌸
Rodgers Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 6:22 AM
Dear Kim, Amen. I can relate to all aspects of getting older and different body parts having issues. I praise God every day that I wake up and have more life to give. My friend, I loved reading your poem this morning. Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 8:55 AM
So glad you happened by! God bless you, Daniel!❤️
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