My words are thick oil

Do you know for a split second you stopped my heart?
So I'd feel the jolt when your touch made it restart
Your hands paint feelings that never truly depart
Those eyes— two gorgeous brown galleries of fine art
My words are thick oil; you've painted with them boldly from our start
Our duet's masterpiece; allowing us to enjoy every part.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 27, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Very beautiful, A.S. Love "Do you know for a split second you stopped my heart" Good to read you too after so much time- <3 :)
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May 29, 2025 at 6:29 PM
It feels good to be read, there us so much sadness in my head... A.S.
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