My Wonderful Mother

My Wonderful Mother..... I thank God for giving me a wonderful mother She is the spirits of my house Her charm of love is always there for me Her loveliness and kindness can not be matched I know how important of her presence at home I never forget her difficult days that she has gone through to bring me up When I think about her sleepless nights and struggle, my tears roll over my eyes With all the struggle and pain she showed me the right path to live in this world I want to repay everything what ever I owe her but I know there is nothing great enough to repay the greatest mother on earth. I only ask God to allow her to live long because she is my wonderful mother. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
( I like to repeat my poem on my mother here which I have written on 2004 because my beloved mother died on 22nd April 2019. She was 97 of age. I miss her now. May her soul rest in peace)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 6/13/2019 3:40:00 PM
A breathtaking tribute to a wonderful mother who you loved so dearly - she is your guardian angel now! Take Care Ravi, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/26/2019 5:21:00 PM
Truly a wonderful tribute to your mother Ravi, the poetry is superb.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/13/2019 5:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated
Date: 5/3/2019 3:51:00 PM
May I give you my condolences, Ravi. Your love for your mother is reflected in these heartfelt lines. Yes...may her soul rest in peace. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/13/2019 5:47:00 AM
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 5/3/2019 8:09:00 AM
Lovely...The fruits of love...Nothing can replace a mother's love...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 5/1/2019 3:32:00 PM
i am saddened to hear of your mother's loss.. this is such an affectionate write, dear ravi... my deepest condolences; she lived a full life!...huggs
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:14:00 PM
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Date: 5/1/2019 3:01:00 PM
Ohhhh!! Sorry to hear of your loss. My mother lived to 96 years and 11 months old. I still miss her even though it was 22 years ago that she died. Very good to read of how you loved your mom. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 4/30/2019 3:48:00 PM
gosh, she just barely passed away. Sorry to hear that, but your resurrected poem has brought her to light for us! My mom is about 87 and starting to have problems. My dad and father in law are in really bad shape, both of them.Time sure does take a toll!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 3:10:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to your mother, Ravi. One way to repay her is to let her know you love her by just given her a hug and to say thank you mom.. as my boys do and that means the world to me.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 12:34:00 PM
Thank God for all mothers...lovely mother tribute Ravi...your beautiful mom is no exception...happy endings...^WW^
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:12:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 12:23:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to the mother who loved you so much and who you love in return. So sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Mother's Day poem with us. God Bless, JB
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:12:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 10:41:00 AM
So sorry for your deep loss, Ravi. We who are blessed with wonderful mothers have much to be thankful for. <3 Kim
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:11:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:33:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your mother and beautiful poem, Rav!
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:11:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:33:00 AM
tHANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY HILLARY.
Date: 4/30/2019 7:01:00 AM
A marvelous tribute to your mother dear Ravi! A hymn to motherhood in general!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/13/2019 10:09:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2019 6:55:00 AM
Great tribute to your beautiful mother Ravi..
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:09:00 PM
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Date: 4/29/2019 7:09:00 AM
My prayers are with you and your family, Ravi. Your poem is a memorial now for your love for your mother. Every word spells gratitude and love you feel.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/30/2019 6:06:00 AM
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Date: 4/29/2019 5:25:00 AM
- Great love for your mother, Ravi - Beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/30/2019 6:06:00 AM
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