My Wonderful Mother

My Wonderful Mother..... I thank God for giving me a wonderful mother She is the spirits of my house Her charm of love is always there for me Her loveliness and kindness can not be matched I know how important of her presence at home I never forget her difficult days that she has gone through to bring me up When I think about her sleepless nights and struggle, my tears roll over my eyes With all the struggle and pain she showed me the right path to live in this world I want to repay everything what ever I owe her but I know there is nothing great enough to repay the greatest mother on earth. I only ask God to allow her to live long because she is my wonderful mother. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
( I like to repeat my poem on my mother here which I have written on 2004 because my beloved mother died on 22nd April 2019. She was 97 of age. I miss her now. May her soul rest in peace)
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Proxenos Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 3:40 PM
A breathtaking tribute to a wonderful mother who you loved so dearly - she is your guardian angel now! Take Care Ravi, Hugs, Jennifer.
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May 26, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Truly a wonderful tribute to your mother Ravi, the poetry is superb.
Sathasivam Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 5:46 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 3:51 PM
May I give you my condolences, Ravi. Your love for your mother is reflected in these heartfelt lines. Yes...may her soul rest in peace. ~ Regards // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 5:47 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Thank you very much
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Lovely...The fruits of love...Nothing can replace a mother's love...
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much
Onclaud Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 3:32 PM
i am saddened to hear of your mother's loss.. this is such an affectionate write, dear ravi... my deepest condolences; she lived a full life!...huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Ohhhh!! Sorry to hear of your loss. My mother lived to 96 years and 11 months old. I still miss her even though it was 22 years ago that she died. Very good to read of how you loved your mom. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 3:48 PM
gosh, she just barely passed away. Sorry to hear that, but your resurrected poem has brought her to light for us! My mom is about 87 and starting to have problems. My dad and father in law are in really bad shape, both of them.Time sure does take a toll!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Wonderful tribute to your mother, Ravi. One way to repay her is to let her know you love her by just given her a hug and to say thank you mom.. as my boys do and that means the world to me.
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much
Warrior Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Thank God for all mothers...lovely mother tribute Ravi...your beautiful mom is no exception...happy endings...^WW^
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Thank you very much
Ball Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 12:23 PM
What a beautiful tribute to the mother who loved you so much and who you love in return. So sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Mother's Day poem with us. God Bless, JB
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May 13, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Thank you very much
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 10:41 AM
So sorry for your deep loss, Ravi. We who are blessed with wonderful mothers have much to be thankful for. <3 Kim
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Thank you very much
Sergi Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 8:33 AM
A beautiful tribute to your mother and beautiful poem, Rav!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Thank you very much
Sergi Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 8:33 AM
tHANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY HILLARY.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 7:01 AM
A marvelous tribute to your mother dear Ravi! A hymn to motherhood in general!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Thank you very much
May Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Great tribute to your beautiful mother Ravi..
Sathasivam Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Thank you very much
Pandit Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 7:09 AM
My prayers are with you and your family, Ravi. Your poem is a memorial now for your love for your mother. Every word spells gratitude and love you feel.
Sathasivam Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 6:06 AM
Thank you very much
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 5:25 AM
- Great love for your mother, Ravi - Beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 6:06 AM
Thank you very much
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