My Wish

I wish I could be a star, 
So that I could see the world from far,
And enjoy shining bright,
To show way to traveler of night.

I wish I could be a flower,
Which grows in natural shower,
And spread its pleasant smell all over,
Which gives soul an internal power.

I wish I could be a bird,
So that I could fly in air away from dirt,
Who could go far from place to place,
And could give people message of success pace
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I wish I could be a cloud,
So I could explain the message of peace aloud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 8:32 AM
Asia - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 7:57 PM
Aisa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:09 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Mckenzie Avatar
August 12, 2008 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations on a lovely write being featured this week ! Laura
Winter Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations Asia on your beautiful poem being featured this week. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 5:28 AM
What a peaceful poem - congrats on being featured and God bless
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Asia . Love, Carol
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August 10, 2008 at 5:32 PM
Congratulations Asia on this sweet poem "My Wish" being featured. Vince
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