My Wish

Oh! I wish history is not in existence 
And yesterday stays out of reference
Perhaps ground will die of hunger
In this case no life is in danger

There is only present and past rots in darkness
And life has no fullstop, but long and endless
So that we see ground ground sir
So that we see ground ground ma

I wish no fear in man's heart
And death kills the death
So that no end to man's life
And forever we live the life

The old becomes young 
And the young remains the young
Incoming generation meets this generation 
And love homes hearts of generations

I wish no wrinkle in mother's face
And fresh does father's face
Like a child of twenty years
Like moon mother's beauty shines

And ash bush becomes black
When shaves no grey but black
They dance not without drum,
Like leaves on the stream 

I feel like they want to prostrate
For me when we take a jaunt
Me child now their father
Oh God I can take this no further!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/1/2017 6:42:00 PM
A beautiful poem, I wish we didn't age or die either.
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Date: 8/24/2017 3:40:00 PM
uplifting and true! Enjoyed this poem. Regards, Craig
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Date: 7/28/2017 2:12:00 PM
I can feel your longing here Afolabi, good of you to comment of my latest write, I must rustle up another at some point.' All the best..)
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Date: 7/28/2017 10:39:00 AM
We could only wish for such things to happen. It's nice to be optimistic. Nice poem, Afolabi.
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Date: 7/18/2017 5:20:00 AM
Awesome poetry so positive just love this..Harry
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Date: 7/2/2017 2:28:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned with a positive thoughts. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:16:00 PM
- Great written, Afolabi - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 7:16:00 PM
If only we have the power to turn our wishes into a project; maybe, that's when we will actualize them.But, wishes can't stop being wishes...Nicely penned dear
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Date: 6/27/2017 10:01:00 PM
A positive write in wishes for a better world Afolabi...
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Date: 6/25/2017 8:26:00 AM
You search for an Uptopia, Afolabi! Let's do away with time and age, pain and problems, birth and death....for those who believe in an eternal perfect afterlife all this is possible! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:53:00 PM
Good to see you writing again my friend, Afolabi! You were missed my friend!
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:34:00 PM
wow, this is a very refreshing poem. I saw a movie once on this theme. It went to a dark place. But the way you imagine it, I would guess this to be paradise!
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