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My Wish

If I had one wish? I would ask for a day To say to my Dad, all I didn’t get to say Everything on my mind In every possible way If I had one wish? I would dance to hearts content My emotions would not be bent Because my father would be here. If only one day I could rent… If I had one wish? I’d wish all time away Without that record, we’d have longer days Untracked time with loved ones And just enjoy all life’s display I would wish away Eve And her eating from that tree So that we all could live forever In God’s kingdom, happy and care-free I would illegalize “goodbye” Then it would never be in existence Our loved ones couldn’t die And we could find other reasons to cry Oh I have to pick just one you say… Well I’ll condense them all together… …….. If I had one wish? I guess, Eternal life’s the card I’d play ©all rights reserved Miranda Lambert For Kristen Bruni’s contest: If I had one wish

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Date: 6/2/2011 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one...Great wishes that you have..Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:46:00 PM
touching me, randa! so awe-inspiring that winning is easy! superb job..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/27/2011 8:58:00 AM
A touching write, Miranda. Hopefully, by the grace of God, your wish might just come true one day! Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/27/2011 5:01:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Randa. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:17:00 PM
* “Yesss * Eternal Life Would Be The Card I Would Hold Tight Unto Also * My Dear Beautiful Miranda. * Smile * Sooo Much Indiscribable Joy When I Reflect Upon Its Truth. * Hold Tight for One Day Your Beauty Shall See Your Precious Father Forevermore. * Very Beautiful Poem * Straight From The Heart * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/26/2011 9:00:00 PM
very touching write Randa and a grand wish .. miss my Daddy to so can relate.. so many unsaid loving things.. good luck in the contest.. hope u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:32:00 PM
Yes condense them all together! ...."Love Unraveled"...... Thanks for your poetry
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:22:00 PM
this is great good luck in the contest cory
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