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My Wings Dont Work

I try to fly in the sun but my wings dont work i try to live in ligth but blinded in dark i forget my image i forget my feelings if its not me whos will is this my thougths i wish were mine my will is never done i wonder if i ever felt love my my god whos forsakeing me or you my wings dont work this is oh so crule

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 5:05:00 PM
Very creative and interesating thoughts on My Wings don't work, marco
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:01:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Marco. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:28:00 PM
wow, deep write, enjoyed..P.D.
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