My Wings Dont Work

I try to fly in the sun
but my wings dont work

i try to live in ligth
but blinded in dark

i forget my image
i forget my feelings

if its not me whos will is this

my thougths i wish were mine
my will is never done

i wonder if i ever felt love

my my god whos forsakeing

me or you

my wings dont work

this is oh so crule
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Very creative and interesating thoughts on My Wings don't work, marco
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October 4, 2010 at 11:01 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Marco. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 10:28 PM
wow, deep write, enjoyed..P.D.
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