My Wedding Dress

Today’s the date I married,
Many, many moons ago.
My wedding dress was long and white;
In back, there was a bow.

It wasn’t from a bridal shop;
I’d purchased it alone.
There was one I’d liked much better
So I’d searched to find a phone.

I called my mom, describing both;
The other one was green,
To match my boyfriend’s 3 piece suit.
Though I was torn between,

My mother’s voice had not one doubt.
In fact, she almost hissed,
“You have to get the white one,”
All my arguments dismissed.

In pictures, we are smiling
And the white dress that I wore
Looked more bridal, but not better
Than the one left at the store.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 2/21/2024 8:56:00 PM
Your poem brings back memories. My mother instisted that my hair not be french braided at my wedding. Her face blanched at the word. I hate my hair in my wedding pictures 26 years later, it was old and farty. Your original green dress and your fiance's remind me of those we wore to the prom in the 80'2. Remember those? They are so silly to look at now I think. This poem was darling. I enjoyed the memories it brought back.
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Date: 11/29/2023 9:02:00 AM
Oh, we have to listen to our mom or become the next bridezilla…lol! An emerald bride. Today some where black! THAT is crazy!
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Date: 11/28/2023 7:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wedding anniversary ... I'm sure you were beautiful, Ilene :) - hugs
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Date: 11/28/2023 5:13:00 AM
What a delightful story my friend. I wonder, if you had gone green, would you still feel the same way about the white one?
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Date: 11/27/2023 11:54:00 PM
Reminds me of that saying, mom's know best. Who can argue with that. Tom
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Date: 11/27/2023 7:43:00 PM
Green? Really? You were ahead of the times, Ilene. Go, green. ~ gw
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Date: 11/27/2023 6:52:00 PM
subtle last verse, sweet memories indeed, as times flows away, thanks for the sensitive poem poet
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Date: 11/27/2023 6:52:00 PM
subtle last verse, sweet memories indeed, as times flows away, thanks for the sensitive poem poet
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Date: 11/27/2023 6:13:00 PM
Funny how mothers take over the weddings. I have concluded that the wedding is more their thing than the brides. Too bad you couldn't have had both dresses.
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Date: 11/27/2023 12:21:00 PM
Hehe …if your mum hadn't been so adamant would you have bought the green dress Ilene? Debx
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Date: 11/27/2023 11:50:00 AM
Looking back can be fun, Ilene. Especially when you realize that it made no difference in the long run. Had you gotten married in blue jeans, you'd be just as married and just as happy:) A fun one!
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