My Vow To God

MY Vow to God

Gathering in the garden of paradise
all the angels busy making arrangements for 
this great auspicious day
Cards are been made with golden threads
Flower arrangements with the most beautiful colours
Each colour reflecting a message to capture the hearts desire
Cards been carefully selected with words written in gold print
welcoming this heavenly moment
Everyone whispering what going on

The gardens perfumed with flowers
lingering its fragrance and filling the air
Dancing angels clapping and dancing in white
clothes golden crowns fairy slippers
smiles of pure angelic being
The bride comes down heaven pathway
each flower greeting her welcome
angels holding her beautiful white gown
taking her to  the bridegroom chamber
Pin drop silence
Not a leaf moving
Nature stops 
God arrive as the bridegroom
Crown of many colours
studded with rubies and gold
God smiles lights up the entire cosmos
What a moment to witness
For god has been waiting such a long time
for this moment for his bride

The bride cries in intense longing
soul surging moment
heart consumed with the burning desire to become one with her lord
Alas silence 
God comes near the bride
the ceremony begins reading of each vows
each vow with the deepest
of emotion and love expressed

Bride vows go like this
I the soul take thee my lord
from this day forward through pain sorrow
Joy and happiness
I pledge my internal vow of true commitment
and unshakable faith
In this alchemy of love
for better or worse 
I take this vow
as my true commitment to you
to obey you follow your commandment
never to forsake no matter what comes my way
I surrender my heart mind and and soul

God says his vows
My child i have been waiting for this moment
Since the time of creation
With this ring  of faith i promise
to never leave you
I will be there for you always
every step of the way
Keep your unwavering faith in me
for this seperation will be impossible
to divide you and me
I will live forever in you 


My bride we share this life
forever in twain with one another
my love for you will be endless your cup will never be empty
My love will overflow never ending I will be faithful always
lets join together and become one in this ocean of love
The angels clapped and rejoiced at his moment
in the power of the court of heaven
I join the brides soul to merge into god love forever
i Know pronounce  
your souls in everlasting love

God than takes his bride in in chariot
to his chamber of love
Thank You for coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/28/2016 9:09:00 AM
VANI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Linda For that support it just give the urge to write more Thank you once again
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