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My Vow

Long and soft
like Habutai silk your hair surrounds me gathering like soft golden clouds, engulfing me with pure pleasure. Your supple lips pout wordless whispers
lingering longingly against my cheek,
as feline softness presses firm against my longing body. Cool satin fingers caress warm tingles through my sensile skin so soft, it is, it takes my breath away, leaving my burning chest empty, as silken strands entwine
so slowly
in pilous brush, pure ecstasy, leaving me breathless, knowing for this moment, I would gladly die for you.
12/07/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2016 2:06:00 PM
Anytime
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations James....Linda
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James Inman
Date: 3/7/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you PD.
Date: 12/24/2015 6:47:00 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
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James Inman
Date: 12/24/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Funom, and have a beautiful Christmas as well.
Date: 12/22/2015 9:31:00 AM
WOW! This beautiful, romantic, sensuous piece just blew me away! Awesome imagery that left me almost breathless! WHEW! This is definitely a winner and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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James Inman
Date: 12/22/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Pandita. I don't think I could have asked for a more beautiful comment. Hope your Holiday is as beautiful.
Date: 12/22/2015 7:56:00 AM
your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.
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James Inman
Date: 12/22/2015 8:09:00 AM
A wonderful and poetic comment, Funom. Thank you very much.
Date: 12/9/2015 9:19:00 PM
OMG, BEST MUSING EVER. I hope this takes a high place. Gosh, i wish I could do one like this, DANG. I have to fave this. You are amazing, Ralph!
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James Inman
Date: 12/10/2015 7:22:00 AM
Andrea, you are too kind to me. You swell my head, especially knowing it comes from a Poet who is as exceptional as you. Thank you so very much.

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