James Inman Poet Free verse

My Vow

Long          and          softlike Habutai silk your hair surrounds me
          gathering like soft     golden clouds, engulfing me with pure pleasure.
                    Your supple lips pout wordless whisperslingering           longingly          against my cheek,as feline softness presses firm against my longing body. 
          Cool satin fingers caress warm tingles          through my sensile skin
               so soft, it is, it takes my breath away, leaving my burning chest empty,
                              as silken strands entwineso          slowlyin pilous brush,          pure ecstasy,
       leaving me breathless, knowing for this moment,   I would gladly die for you.



12/07/15

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Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2016 at 2:06 PM Anytime

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2016 at 12:12 PM Congratulations James....Linda James Inman March 7, 2016 at 1:17 PM Thank you PD.

Funom Makama December 24, 2015 at 6:47 AM This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year. James Inman December 24, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thank you Funom, and have a beautiful Christmas as well.

Pandita Sietesantos December 22, 2015 at 9:31 AM WOW! This beautiful, romantic, sensuous piece just blew me away! Awesome imagery that left me almost breathless! WHEW! This is definitely a winner and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita James Inman December 22, 2015 at 11:25 AM Thank you Pandita. I don't think I could have asked for a more beautiful comment. Hope your Holiday is as beautiful.

Funom Makama December 22, 2015 at 7:56 AM your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7. James Inman December 22, 2015 at 8:09 AM A wonderful and poetic comment, Funom. Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2015 at 9:19 PM OMG, BEST MUSING EVER. I hope this takes a high place. Gosh, i wish I could do one like this, DANG. I have to fave this. You are amazing, Ralph! James Inman December 10, 2015 at 7:22 AM Andrea, you are too kind to me. You swell my head, especially knowing it comes from a Poet who is as exceptional as you. Thank you so very much.