My Vision

I have this wondrous Vision that the world could live in peace,
The fighting and the bloodshed would finally all cease,
World leaders and ambassadors would get along together,
We'd live in peace and harmony hand in hand forever,
It's like that in the spirit world, that's how it should be here too
No anger, hurt or malicious tongue, just peace for me and you.
So let us band good spirited people, let us all unite,
We'll send our prayers around the world, to make our future bright .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 28, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Wonderfully expressed and such a beautiful thought. Hopefully someday your vision will come true.
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March 28, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Thank you Chris for your comment it was very much appreciated.
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March 28, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Beautiful sentiment fabulously penned! xomo
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March 28, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Maureen for your comment it was much appreciated as a relative new comer to Poetrysoup .
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March 28, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Beautiful Jennie, wouldn't it be lovely to live in a world that was bright and peaceful.
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March 28, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Elizabeth your support means a lot . What a wonderful world this could be .
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