My Vision

take a holiday from your perspective, don't you say?
it would help you to evolve past hey!
my way or the highway, as it only causes pain,
what happened to beauty?
maybe it never existed just shame,
covered up by the rights to exist, in vain!
none the less i love this vein of creativity,
that streams from my pain, as i realize it's all
a gain, of experiences with which to change
my pane, so my vision won't be so stained.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kimathi Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Greetings, Rospel. I really enjoyed your piece. Have a blessed 2017!!! ;-)
Funk Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 1:03 PM
thank you teddy!
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