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My Violet

My chosen solitary Violet from a bouquet of barbed roses displaying her natural beauty with a little love and care exposing her variety of petals of colour and shapes with inner passion, luscious looks a true reflection of a Violet in full flourishing glory and perfect scent her soothing, swaying saunter in natural flora style fine hairs on my body and shivers down my spine sent, her presence satisfying spectators without pretentious appeal staring expressions to undress this natural loveliness not necessary. Turning the focus abruptly from conversation to natural beauty surrounded by withering, wilting blossoms revealing their thorns, in awe and proud of my love for a unique flower I selected this Violet among the eagerly chosen roses is finally mine.
08/23/2016

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Date: 8/27/2016 11:38:00 AM
I'm sure you'd rather have a shrinking violet who is true to you than a rose with those vicious thorns Mark. Great poem for the contest I think this will appeal to Cas:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 8/28/2016 11:40:00 PM
I certainly have a beautiful Violet in my life. Thank you for reading. - Here's hoping for the contest - all the best your side. Mark
Date: 8/25/2016 8:00:00 PM
she may be a shy violet but she shines among them all. So nice, Mark!
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 8/25/2016 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea - your comment is valuable. Mark

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