My View of You

Your arm wraps 
around her shoulder.
She slips in—wears you
easily and steps in the place
that was our embrace 
for eighteen years.
This looks so effortless for you.

Out of breath—
my life crosses the finish line
of a marathon-marriage to this 
slow-motion, surreal, stream of  pain.
Unsteady on my feet like a nervous bride,
my forevers and until death vows
unceremoniously fade..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/8/2024 5:03:00 PM
I hope your love life gets better.
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:36:00 AM
Hello Tamra, yes it hurts when a marriage falls apart. It also hurts when the husband cheats. What happened to the marriage vows? is it only one person that believes in the marriage vows? /Darlene/
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:59:00 PM
Oh my, Tamra, this poem could have been written by me, though not as beautifully. May I just say it speaks to me, and then some! Thank you! Ellen
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:47:00 PM
This poem really moved me because I can feel every word and my heart despairs. I feel you .
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Date: 4/11/2011 7:17:00 AM
I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today Tamra. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/24/2009 8:32:00 PM
Beautiful poem indeed- ed
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Date: 8/22/2009 10:39:00 AM
Very poignant write here, Tamra. So much expressed with few words! Really a keeper that I've added to my favorites list. The marathon marriage to the slow-motion pain and the vows at the end ... its an incredible piece!!
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:40:00 PM
well written and i also enjyed the natural flow... enjoy your weekend. :)
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:17:00 AM
I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Tamra. Love, Carol
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