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My View

My view from the clouds are quite amazing, Off in the fields I can see the guns blazing. I visited this place once before, I leaned off the edge of the 15th floor, They just weren't ready to open the door, And so I had to wait, a year and no more. My view from the clouds are a site to see, Time has passed and its since been year three. I've punched my ticket many many times, Failed attempts, and not my time combine to decline. Waiting for it to finally happen, I'm last in line. Halo over my head, I can once again shine. My view from the clouds are breathtaking, Here because I chose to start spectating. It might not have necessarily been fair for you, But for me, it was much long overdue, I just wanted to be there so I could pursue, This beautiful view.

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Date: 2/9/2011 12:18:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Dale. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:38:00 AM
Nice flow !Like it--kashinath
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Date: 2/7/2011 2:31:00 PM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. This is not a bad first submission. I hope to see more fine work from you in the near future.
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Date: 2/7/2011 1:04:00 PM
Very scenic view you have pen pictured, Dale
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:29:00 PM
Nice poem, Dale,, and welcome to the soup.. a beautiful view.. sure enjoyed,.. Linda
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