Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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My Very Sweet Love - the Hotan Style

~My  Very  Sweet  Love~ 
(Hotan Linked ) 


Here I am my sweet love 
Love, I'm waiting here for you 
You mean the whole world to me 
Me and you 
You're  here  in my heart 
Heart, mind, soul 
Soul and heart  loves you 
You're  all  I  want, I  long for 
For you I dream of. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2016



March.03.2017


“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain 


~Author's  Notes:

The Hotan is  a Japanese poetry form or style.The  Hotan gets its name for being  a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).

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Chris Green April 3, 2017 at 3:12 PM Really nicely done, I had seen this form of poem before and you did a fantastic job with it expressing love and affection linked, as those two terms should be. Dorian Petersen Potter April 3, 2017 at 5:38 PM Thank you ever so kindly Chris, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem and for your very generous 7.I deeply appreciate it all:)). Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) D