My Very Own Week--Just For Me-- Are You Kidding Me

If I could do most anything
A week to have for my very own?!
I'd put away the mop and broom!
The paper work would have to wait!
No rush to work, ....so what if late?
I'd put my chores upon the shelf
I'd sleep in late, perhaps till noon
I'd take the car out for a ride
I'd walk about the countryside
And lay along the riverbank
And toss some sticks, and take a swim
And ride my bike, and play some pranks
Eat peanut butter with loads of jam
And make mud pies....because I can!
And watch the ducks and geese that gather
Those ticking clocks?....Ignore....I'd rather!
I'd sit out in the sun that gleams
Among the trees I'd lie and dream
I'd head back home, and whistle songs
I'd make a call and right some wrongs
I'd take a nap and eat a snack
Then put music on and do a dance
I'd take a good book from the shelf
Curl up and indulge myself

A mom like me who hovers...races...
To keep the pace, going places
Helping, filling needs of many faces
Never has alone time...spaces
So one week's worth of self indulgence
Sounds like bliss...could it exist??
Perhaps I should find a great disguise...
Would that be wise?  Go undercover...
Just a week, sounds quite resplendent...
Just as long as it's not forever....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Awesome. Nice going. xxxRalph
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:47 PM
sounds like a fun week, congrats on your win in the contest
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 6:51 AM
hehe, John made me laugh with his comment.. Congratulations Carrie on your win in Carol's contest :-) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:39 AM
carrie,Congrats on notching 2nd place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Oh Carrie I so very agree with you. I would love to spend a week like yours. many congratulations for this win.
Freeman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:52 PM
You sound a little skeptical in your title Carrie, Lol. A woman's work is never done! Smile. I think the cause is their man's imperfection! Think so? LOL. Congratulatiions on your well deserved win Carrie. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Yes, you always write something great. Congrats on your win. BG
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Congratulation, CArrie, I can see why Carol gave so many high places all the same and in the end, even the two wins are for me as good as the ones!! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this brilliant piece for an entry .. enjoy your top spot with so many wonderful peers today with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations and thank you Carrie for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:32 PM
good week indeed...make it happen!
Muzzey Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Excellent write, I enjoyed reading this wonderful verse. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Very interesting write carrie, Good luck in the contest,
Roberts Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 1:13 PM
cute one, good luck in the contest
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