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My Very First Poem

Moe and Joe had a toe. It went too slow so they called Bozo. Bozo came and made a flame but they couldn't blame the sugar cane. So Moe and Joe got a new toe and it didn't go slow so they were full of snow. I wrote the above when I was in kindergarten. Well, my mother wrote it for me because I couldn't read or write at the time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/23/2012 9:58:00 AM
I love this.It's got a real strength to it.
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Date: 6/19/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Billy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:06:00 PM
you can make life for pretend people i can tell.
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Date: 11/6/2009 1:21:00 PM
funny, enjoyed
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Date: 11/6/2009 12:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup dear William. I know you will like it here. You will learn a lot here too, smile. You keep writing and I shall keep reading your wonderful poems. This is amazing poem for a boy in kindergarten! Love Light Patty
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