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My Very First Haiku

Deep hurt feeds on hurt Elusive joy avoids pain Compromise always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/30/2017 5:02:00 AM
Excellent! I very much enjoyed!
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Peter Rees
Date: 11/1/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thank you Judy for this kind comment
Date: 8/24/2017 12:26:00 PM
True life is a series of compromises if you want to move along somewhat smoothly. I use forget is all. lol A good Haiku for first attempt.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/24/2017 12:28:00 PM
please excuse the typo it is just not use.

Book: Shattered Sighs