My Very First Haiku

Deep hurt feeds on hurt
Elusive joy avoids pain
Compromise always.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Konos Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:02 AM
Excellent! I very much enjoyed!
Rees Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Judy for this kind comment
Cresswell Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:26 PM
True life is a series of compromises if you want to move along somewhat smoothly. I use forget is all. lol A good Haiku for first attempt.
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August 24, 2017 at 12:28 PM
please excuse the typo it is just not use.
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