My Valentine Etheree

A 
lovely
peacock is,
This love of mine.
A rainbow concealed, 
He would not reveal his 
many colors until he 
felt I would respond in kind to 
his glorious, colorful romance.
As years increase I remain spellbound still!

© 2011 Connie Marcum Wong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 23, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Lovely Etheree here.Liked the comparison of your love with peacock very much.
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June 30, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Yep, we wait in fear for your step toward us. And when we love truly, we are hesitating, unsure, wondering if we have been rejected, or accepted. How we love you gals, and our delicate egos shimmer with unknowing. Then the step towards us and everything is then fine and we talk about our silly ponderings as if nothing had ever happened :) Well, that's me at least, haha.
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May 6, 2011 at 2:10 PM
That is some more of a love to be like a peacock..Enjoyed..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 10:07 PM
connie, I may use that one poem for the challenge, the one you just commented to. Let me go now and see if you have any more new posts!
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February 15, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Hey! my long lost friend, how are you? lovely valentine's poem, hope all is well with you and family! love, SimoneX
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February 14, 2011 at 11:51 PM
and post some more!!
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February 14, 2011 at 11:51 PM
oh, I am glad to see you posted this one here, Connie. It's so cute. I love when you do etheree. Luv, Andrea
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February 14, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Love this Etheree, Connie. " It's been a while. I'm glad to see you and pray all is well. Happy Valentine's Day. Always, Annalise (Audrey)
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February 14, 2011 at 2:06 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```C*O*N*N*I*E M*A*R*C*U*M W*O*N*G¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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February 14, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Super good news Connie and a super good write I have read from your creative pen on this day of luv... please send us some of that super warm weather my friend.. keeping u all in our prayers and wishing u the best Valentine's Day ... with lots of luv..
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