Charles Clive Poet Limerick

My Valentine

Remember, my sweet Valentine,
the moment you said you'd be mine.
A rug by the fire,
we shared our desire
and pledged that our hearts should entwine.

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For Poet Destroyer's Valentine Competition.

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Ralph Taylor February 17, 2013 at 5:01 PM Congrats, Charles. Nice going. Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2013 at 5:02 AM - A lovely Valentines poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, CHARLES !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 16, 2013 at 10:37 PM Congratulations my dear Charles for your very sweet write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May February 16, 2013 at 6:09 PM congrats on your win Charles

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2013 at 4:36 PM Sounds very romantic. Congrats!

Debbie Guzzi February 16, 2013 at 3:36 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick February 16, 2013 at 3:23 PM Congratulations on your fine win! Excellent poem!

Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2013 at 2:13 PM Charles, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2013 at 2:40 PM It's not humorous, but it IS excellently metered and rhymed!!! and a sweet valentine!