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My Valentine

My Valentine February the fourteenth next week is Valentine's day, and hope for a better gift but I think I'll need to pray. Last year I wasn't impressed with the roses he gave me. They were a bunch of plastic which he probably found free. My Valentine is a scrooge doesn't like to spend money. Although he says he loves me and calls me dear and honey. I have sent out subtle hints, which he'd better take to heart, diamonds are a girl's best friend He'll understand – if he's smart. Valentine's day has arrived, There's a twinkle in his eye as he hands me a small box with red ribbon to untie. The gift's wrapped to perfection I wonder what it will be? Maybe a diamond necklace that would look perfect on me. I ripped away the wrapping for which I had no regards, and yes, I've received diamonds in a pack of playing cards! Copyright © Vivien Wade Feb. 2019

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Date: 12/14/2019 12:56:00 AM
Thanks Juliet. Good to have a bit of humor as it is good medicine. Blessings, Vivien
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Date: 12/13/2019 10:02:00 PM
LOL. Clever ending.
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Karen for comment. Many of my poems have a 'twist in the tale', Eulogy being one of them. Happy writing, blessings Vivien
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Date: 2/21/2019 12:55:00 AM
What a funny ending, and you have validated his fondness for being thrifty to boot!
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