My Unique Line Is Ps

"Life, fleeting as a matchstick flame"


                         Quoted from my Pantoum Poem:
                                         "Evermore"
                     
This line stands out among others, 
as it holds a simple truth.
Life may blaze brightly,
yet lasts but an instant
in the scheme of time,
past, present and future.


For the contest:
THE MOST IMPRESSIVE LINE YOU EVER THOUGHT OF ... 
AND WHAT MAKES IT UNIQUE~ 
Sponsored by Poet Destroyer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Loving Iii Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 9:32 AM
this inspires me.
Deane Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Beautifully penned...congrats on your win in PD's contest...happy to have read this morning...luv shannon
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest Paula. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2011 at 10:33 PM
HI PAULA, AGAIN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 9:04 PM
YOurs was one of the best! Congrats on the winners' list.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Congrats Paula on a terrific win with this awesome unique line luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 5:18 PM
wow ..excellent and profound my friend.. good luck in the contest... thankxx so much for honoring my poem for 8th place in the cardboard man.. most impressive list of winners ..I am so honored ..thankxx Paula..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Yes, reminding me of grains of sand on a beach, for how small we are in the scheme of things too. And yet so important! Great choice, Paula. Best of luck.
Dillard Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Oooooo....I like this line. Masterfully done! RAY
Goff Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 4:20 PM
well done! Paula! jimbo
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