My Unique Line Cb

A speck...upon this earth am I






This is a unique line as I can face this fact.
This is who I am.

For P.D's  Contest
6th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Chutani Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 2:44 AM
Carol, Great one-liner for those who realize. Mohan
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Thank you to all who have written upon my page. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2011 at 10:32 PM
HI CAROL AGAIN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Thank you P.D. I am happy you liked it. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 9:01 PM
way to go, Carol. congrats in the one line contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Congrats Carol on a big win for this unique line my friend... always poignant ...
Johnson Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 10:19 PM
unique 2.....well done baby blue...
Sweetheart Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 9:00 PM
most excellent expression of our true selves Carol.. a loving and lovely thought..good luck in PD's contest my friend..luv..
Seraphin Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 5:04 PM
* “Well, If Your Lovely Beauty Is But A Speck Then * I Am Not Even A Particle of Dust * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yesss, I Most Surely Do * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
Fraser Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 2:46 PM
We sure are Carol. Good luck in pd's contest :)
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Dear Carol, I was just writing a comment to Jimbo Goff about feeling like a "speck" in the universe. No one can argue with the truth of our monoku. Wishing you succcess in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 6:48 AM
I like to remeber how big the universe is and I am so small compared to that.
Agtani Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:52 PM
Enigmatic monoku Carol. It is such a simple line but it made me think. A speck? a small particle? Nice monoku. I want to thank you for your kind words on my works. Dalila
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:43 PM
YEs, I think it says in the Bible less than a grain of sand. And yet we are still very unique!!
Ball Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Really deep thinking here. Too bad more of us don't look at ourselves as we really are and stop thinking we are so all important that nothing else in creation matters. Reminds me of an old saying. "I'M NOT IMPORTANT BECAUSE OF WHAT I OWN BUT BECAUSE OF WHO OWNS ME." God Bless, JB
Neels Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Love his Carol, you say so much with this line.. Hope the week ahead will be a great one.. Love Wilma
Song Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Ain't this the truth,...yet,...I am a miracle knitted together in my mother's womb.... Gwendolen
Horne Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Indeed, Carol - it puts things into perspective when we think of ourselves like that, doesn't it? Many congrats on your wins too : )
Sivey Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Yeahs we are all just a speck on this Earth...Little moving specks of dust-like pieces scattered across the land! Great write Carol!!
Smith Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:04 AM
What the heck! I expect this speck to collect lots more respect.
Wood Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 6:38 AM
or on earth i am a speck? x deano x
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