my unfunny valentine

I bought her flowers
she suffered from hay fever ~
I went home alone
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Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:05 PM
Haha. I like one funny like this. Congrats
Kitchin Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Bryn, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu.
Mckeithan Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 3:48 PM
LOL. I know it is listed as unfunny but good irony. At least you tried. That should have counted for something. Good one
Lane Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Oh gosh, but your "unfunny" is delightfully humorous, Bryn.
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