My Uncle Col

My uncle Col, i would like to point out
\                that i have an idea whats going about
                 in your head and heart that you have gap
                 that`s a continuous running,just like a tap

                But i really hope that you can see
                that family love will always be
                there if ever you need it most 
                although you have son`s and grandchildren to boast
    
                And all that you need when you look above
                clasp your hands together,and you will have love
                `cos Margret will always be looking down
                to lift up your spirits your mood and your frown 


                                R.I.P AUNTY MARGRET X
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 9:07 PM
PS Thanks for your comment to my poem today!
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June 11, 2011 at 9:05 PM
this is a sweet poem for your uncle col, who seems to have a few problems it seems! I take it you are of the texting generation?? I like your down home approach to poetry, but gosh, I guess I am old fashioned about wanting to see the words all printed out. I'm terrible reading texts too, just an old English teacher. Welcome to Soup. Andrea
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