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My Unback

Flat
My unback
Taunts me
My front
Of nothing
Protruding
i'm disillusioned
Seeking
The model body
To be a hottie
But thin is phat
And fat is cash
In the right places
Botox faces
Even so
Silicone dreams
Are not for me
Nor twin salines
Instead I look down
And wish for growth
Sadly disappointed
Because I know
I won't

depressionintrospectionfree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

September 18, 2011 at 1:26 AM

Sweetie, if you are thin, you are much better off. Probably my back problem all stems from me having the opposite of THIS problem. WE just can't win in this world!!! I sure enjoy seeing your new posts when you get them up. SEe ya tomorrow, Susan.

Prince Ekpemandu

September 16, 2011 at 5:16 PM

beautiful...love reading this...love people with great imagination...and you have one dear

Zzzzz Zzzzz

September 16, 2011 at 12:32 PM

Sad but true...most of us don't quite have the bodies we would like to have. But personality and chacarter count for far more than any skin-deep beauty. Some of the most charismatic people are not really good lookers. Besides, I'm sure you look as cute as can be! Hi Susan, I'm not really at the Soup much at the moment... computer problems. I'm still writing though, and hope to be back (with a new computer!) in a week or two. xoxo Robert.