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My Unback

Flat My unback Taunts me My front Of nothing Protruding i'm disillusioned Seeking The model body To be a hottie But thin is phat And fat is cash In the right places Botox faces Even so Silicone dreams Are not for me Nor twin salines Instead I look down And wish for growth Sadly disappointed Because I know I won't

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2011 1:26:00 AM

Sweetie, if you are thin, you are much better off. Probably my back problem all stems from me having the opposite of THIS problem. WE just can't win in this world!!! I sure enjoy seeing your new posts when you get them up. SEe ya tomorrow, Susan.

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 9/16/2011 5:16:00 PM

beautiful...love reading this...love people with great imagination...and you have one dear

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 9/16/2011 12:32:00 PM

Sad but true...most of us don't quite have the bodies we would like to have. But personality and chacarter count for far more than any skin-deep beauty. Some of the most charismatic people are not really good lookers. Besides, I'm sure you look as cute as can be! Hi Susan, I'm not really at the Soup much at the moment... computer problems. I'm still writing though, and hope to be back (with a new computer!) in a week or two. xoxo Robert.

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/16/2011 10:36:00 AM

It is said beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I believe real beauty is inside. Don't dispair. You could look like me. Liked your poem.

Ernie J

Date: 9/16/2011 10:35:00 AM

So sad. I am sure you have good qualities. Find them with your poetry.