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My Two Hands

"Anything Handmade" contest

                                                      With just my two hands..
                                                       I created a warm heart ..
                                                      One that feels and loves..
                                                     I carved away all the hurt..
                                                     Then I saw it was my own..


By Michael J Falotico

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 11:53 AM

fantasizing is stimulating .. my hands are my mind where u are concerned since miles keeping us from forbidden fruit.. but.. words have staying power and are more meaningful ... the depth of emotion never vanishes but continues to flourish... until production manifests.. I am always here for u Michael.. and dreams come true all the time... others considered.. nothing taken away from them.. with fantasies... the heart knows what it wants luv....J.G. in dream mode all day..

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 8, 2011 at 11:12 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Anything Homemade"contest Michael. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2011 at 8:03 PM

Yours had a lot of creativity to it. Outside the box! Congrats on your win, Michael.

Sara Kendrick

June 7, 2011 at 3:39 PM

Congratulations on your win with this insightful work..Sara

Gautami Phookan

June 7, 2011 at 12:31 AM

O my God! This was sooo beautiful..Congrats Michael on your fabulous win in nette's contest..gautami

Jack Horne

June 6, 2011 at 10:24 AM

Many congrats on all your wins, Michael : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2011 at 9:01 AM

Congrats Michael on your exciting win in Nette's contest with this fantastic creation in poetry my W.K. your Jersey Girl absorbs all your words as winners luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 6, 2011 at 9:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Michael

James Peranteau

June 2, 2011 at 7:22 AM

You had me all the way on this write dear poet !!!! Excellent lead ! ...I'm reading your writes today until I hit that Monoku Micheal.........

Busaba Patanawiroj

May 31, 2011 at 5:04 AM

Thanks Michael...it is very very lovely and warm, I like it esp. the first two lines.

Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2011 at 12:11 AM

Wonderful message eloquently displayed, Michael.

Robert A. Dufresne

May 29, 2011 at 8:55 PM

interesting, introspective and surprising ending. Well done Michael!

Kash Poet

May 29, 2011 at 1:49 PM

Amazing poetry from you Michael....love it..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 29, 2011 at 12:39 PM

oh ..oh...oh... u should frame this piece in gold or platinum for the content and value of these tremendous words my friend.. so dear... a master poet and a master craftsman.. what more could anyone ask for luv.. your Jersey Girl in astounded mode making this a new favorite my W.K..luv..always...forever..beyond...

Jack Horne

May 29, 2011 at 12:30 PM

Lovely tender piece, Michael : )

Poet Destroyer A

May 29, 2011 at 12:02 PM

Michael, you know the beauty of your words never stop... gosh ,.. im not bragging but how do you do it... I bet your just a charmed man. Wiggled your way in lifestyle, because you belong. Yes you belong warming hearts.. you done mastered art in 2 ways. I have the perfect vision for this poem.. one is gods 2 hands. The other is your hands carving a heart and finding and swaving to the rhythm oh your own heartbeat.. only we create our happy hearts.. and than share the warmth through smiles,..p.d.