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My Twilight Sunshower

Listen to the trees They whisper many stories Daring us to dream For Raul Moreno's Solace in Nature Contest

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Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/14/2009 8:21:00 AM

CONGRATS! on your win in Raul's contest. Good job.

Elaine George

Date: 10/8/2009 1:51:00 AM

Love this beautiful Haiku, Joseph. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/4/2009 5:23:00 PM

The title of your haiku made it very intriguing to read! Congratulations with your winner!

Date: 10/1/2009 12:48:00 PM

Nice use of personification and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/1/2009 12:03:00 AM

Joseph, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 6/25/2009 9:06:00 PM

beautiful write

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 1:42:00 PM

What a beautiful haiku, Joseph! Rain tends to make us sleepy and lead us to a world of dreams. Very nice.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/3/2009 6:13:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. Imagery sets the mood inside and out. Good luck in the contest! Welcome to PoetrySoup and thank you so kindly for your thoughtful congrats. Love, Shar

Lesley Grimshaw

Date: 6/3/2009 3:36:00 AM

This haiku has fluid charm a lilting cadence

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 6/2/2009 2:50:00 PM

Awesome haiku, loved the image you've created here! Thank you for your time reading/commenting my work. Rgds, E

John Heck

Date: 6/2/2009 2:23:00 PM

Hey Joey - This is a superior haiku! Great imagery and a wonderful moral sleeps within each line. Hope to be reading more of your works. I see immense talent in your writings. Peace always, John