My Twilight Sunshower

Listen to the trees
  They whisper many stories
     Daring us to dream




For Raul Moreno's
Solace in Nature Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nieves Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 8:21 AM
CONGRATS! on your win in Raul's contest. Good job.
George   Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:51 AM
Love this beautiful Haiku, Joseph. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie.
Augustus Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 5:23 PM
The title of your haiku made it very intriguing to read! Congratulations with your winner!
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October 1, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Nice use of personification and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Joseph. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Joseph, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 9:06 PM
beautiful write
Devonshire Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 1:42 PM
What a beautiful haiku, Joseph! Rain tends to make us sleepy and lead us to a world of dreams. Very nice.
Winter Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Imagery sets the mood inside and out. Good luck in the contest! Welcome to PoetrySoup and thank you so kindly for your thoughtful congrats. Love, Shar
Grimshaw Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 3:36 AM
This haiku has fluid charm a lilting cadence
Santiago Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Awesome haiku, loved the image you've created here! Thank you for your time reading/commenting my work. Rgds, E
Heck Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Hey Joey - This is a superior haiku! Great imagery and a wonderful moral sleeps within each line. Hope to be reading more of your works. I see immense talent in your writings. Peace always, John
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