My Twilight Poetry

Poetry to me is the expression of one’s own heartbeat.

Just as its rhythmic presence fluctuates or subsides at different intervals of our lives.

Poetry is universally recognized by all.

There is an immediate touch

Melancholy

Yesterday

Tomorrow

Skulking somewhere in the deep
 
The voices echo 
Through my head
The voices are foreign
I cant quite make out the sound
But you are here I know
Please kiss my love
I say to you
Kiss the thought I have so new
In the shadow of the dawn
There was the touch
That everyone looks toward
The light...
 
 
My twilight poetry
 

“If it is a miracle any sort of evidence will answer but if it is a fact than proof is necessary.” 
Mark Twain
 
Brooke Dylan 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:46 PM
My friend this is an exceptional piece. One that reveals both the talent of the author and the universal appeal of poetry.. Huge Bravo!!!!!
Thompson Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Hi Brooke, I enjoyed this composition. I find peace in writing and it is something I cherish. Through this piece, I see you feel the same. Keep writing and I will keep reading. TFS . Congrats on being a "New Best Poet". Take care~ Jess
Lamoureux Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 8:33 AM
I love every word except the one "Skulking" for me it has a negative feel that seems foreign to the rest of the piece. In my minds eye I have replaced it with "languishing".
Sirak Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:27 AM
This is a great description of poetry. There are so many good lines here but the one that really grabs me is "skulking somewhere in the deep" I have felt that way about the words when buried truths were demanding to be written.
Dylan Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Hi Monterey.. how are you?? so good to see you my friend.. thanks
Lindley Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 6:49 PM
I see we both see poetry as gifted treasures cast from the true heart to pleasure and help others in life. A brilliant write my friend. Voices in my head strike me until I deliver their music..
Deschler Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 5:37 PM
I loved that first line, because I feel the same way about poetry. If it's not written from the heart and the soul, then it doesn't seem real to me.... Your poem was written and expressed so beautifully, Brooke. Nice work, my friend!
Dylan Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Thank you so much Kelly... Have a great Memorial day
Christian Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 2:55 PM
a nice poem
Dylan Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 10:32 PM
THANK YOU Diane
Hyler Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
Dylan Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 10:30 PM
THANK YOU for visiting James
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