My Turquoise Sea

A memory triggered by my cologne
A crisp clean scent, like morning dew
Days of chaos and confusion
Hoping for relaxation
The sound of a gentle rain tape playing in the background
Lulling the children to sleep at rest time
Laundry, dishes, housework and ten children
Day after day
Monotony 
Then there was the neighbor 
His smile, his laugh, his turquoise eyes
Shining and dancing with magic
His voice and words oozing charm
His heart so sensitive and full of spirit
Tenderness dripping from every vein of his body
Sexy and mysterious, muscular and gentle
His soul alive with adventure
A drifter cowboy type
He picked me up with one swift movement 
And placed me on a pedestal 
Rescuing me from the dreariness
He pressed his lips to mine and I knew
The ordinary quickly faded away
My toes curled and my heart melted like butter
I drifted as if caught in the wind on fairy dust
Into the depths of the turquoise sea that surrounded me
His eyes, my cologne, and the whirlwind of euphoria


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reynolds Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Beautiful, Lena! I love turquise - amazing. thanks for your always wonderful comments, love, Kristin
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 7:52 AM
Hi Lolita... wonderful... marvelous... just loved it.. beautifully written ! ... ps thanks for the comment :)
Strand Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Thank you for your bolg comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 11:57 PM
Lovely love poetry Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Winter Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Sounds like a fairy tale Cinderella : ). So beautifully written. Swept away in your 'Turquoise Sea'. Love, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 1:36 PM
An absolutely breathtaking account of a man whos charms transport you to a "whirlwind of euphoria." You give hope to those who feel trapped by mundane existences. And, wow, those turquoise eyes must captivate! Beautiful poem, Lolita! Love, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Lena I love the way this poem takes the ordinary and uses the gift of love to make it extra-ordinary - The content of this poem is priceless, YF4L - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 11:47 AM
And swept you off your feet.....lucky girl!!!
Shango Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Sounds like the thrill of catching butterflies ... pretty convincing write and one dynamic with emotion ... what a beautiful canvas of words to paint love's story. Praises
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