My Turn

You have had your turn for an hour I promise,
And now I need a turn.
Really, it's not at all fair
You have had your turn for an hour I promise.
I need a turn you should share.
I am not trying to be selfish.
You have had your turn for an hour I promise.
And now I need a turn.


**Disclaimer:  This is my first ever attempt at a Triolet poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Good effort, Miranda. I like it. Practice makes perfect, they say. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Hawley Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Thank you.
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Excellent first attempt, Miranda
Hawley Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 1:05 PM
Thank you ??.
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