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My Trusy Laptop

I’m sitting here now with my laptop on my knee I stopped a while earlier while I had my tea I love using my laptop to converse and play I am off work so it has whiled away the day I checked out my twitter and facebook too And I checked out my emails a time or two I have written some poems on Microsoft word Things from my mind that I wanted heard I have one eye on the laptop in front of me The other eye is concentrating on the TV The Internet has opened up a world of hope If you need to use it there is So much scope I work on computers when I’m at work too But that is my work the things I have to do You’d think I’d need a rest from it when at home I find it entertaining but I still talk on the phone There are always many things to do when online Technology moves on so fast but that’s just fine I can talk to lots of people on messenger live When I’m using my laptop I feel really alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/28/2009 6:47:00 AM
Just read an article that said that the computer with internet kept people younger more mentally alert and helped them live longer. This is an added benefit. Love the poem and the topic. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/27/2009 12:49:00 PM
Pamela, i also work with computers at work and at home i have two + my laptop. I would be lost without them >> kool piece >> James
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Date: 10/27/2009 11:04:00 AM
Pamela - think we must have been twins in a past life because your poem sums up my day to a tee!!! Loved it. Regards Janette
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Date: 10/27/2009 4:31:00 AM
Thank you Pamela for your excellent poem this morning. Keep on keepin on. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:48:00 PM
Pam.. this poem is terrific and u sound like my twin sister... its like I was reading about me... thankxxx for this excellent write .. so casual and free ... glad my poetry touched u today .. will keep on with it now that I am off from work too... Linda-Maire
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