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My True Passion

Love my passion for dance Every eye glues in trance Even then I don't shy Gutsy, when am on spy Swaying graceful on stage How tactful I engage ! Hear great applauds at end In gait, I halt and bend 29-6-2020 Note:Verses in Essence -8 lines poetry Contest. Sponsored by Joseph May.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:48:00 AM

Good luck in the contest; I think this makes me want to dance which I have not done since a knee injury five years ago.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 1:09:00 PM

Hello Caren Mam, Thanks a lot for your support & encouragement..:-) Oh,thats sad to know.Hope your doing well now.I will pray God to keep you happy and healthy. Come on,Be strong ,you can enjoy dance if you make up your mind.:-). Take care.With love~Deepa

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/29/2020 9:38:00 AM

Lovely lines, I danced along reading them. My partner was, I should say is, a dancer, I too have have passion for dance. Never stop dancing Deepa, xomo!

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 12:28:00 PM

Hello Mo mam, Thanks a bunch for your kind words of appreciation and blessing.:-) Wow ...amazed to know that your partner is a dancer:-)Keep your passion alive.Put on the music and go for a duet with your partner:-) Enjoy everyday dancing.;-) Sure mam, I will never stop. Dance is my secret of energy:-) Have a nice day.Much love~Deepa

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2020 8:39:00 AM

Great eight liner Deepa, turn up the music. Good luck in the contest Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 8:41:00 AM

Hello Tom Sir, Thankyou for your warm appreciation.:-) Yes my music is turned on;-) Best wishes for you too. Have a great day~Deepa