My true love

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My true love gave it to me I shall keep it forever As she is so important to me I shall keep it forever more

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/9/2023 1:28:00 PM

The cutest thing ever. And, without a doubt, even the simplest presents from those who sincerely love can represent the world. Poetry of tremendous beauty:

Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/9/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thankyou Sotto, for those lovely words. Yes small gifts from the people you love make the world of difference.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/9/2023 6:48:00 AM

Thats so sweet. And yes little things our true love give us can mean so much to us. Beautiful poem: pleasure reading this

Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/9/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thankyou Ink Empress. It is lovely when little things mean a lot when true love gives it to you.

Silent One

Date: 12/9/2023 6:14:00 AM

This is lovely.. nice to see you posting like this..

Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/9/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thankyou Silent One. Had a bit of a moment. But means a lot when someone you gives you something beautiful. Wakes you up to the best things in life.