My Tree's Seasons

spring wakens my tree - a bejeweled perfumed bride. . . . love birds make their nest summer’s yellowed lawn beneath my tree’s sombrero. . . . grass breathes sweet relief fall’s quick change artist - from green to gold to crimson. . . . disrobed, my tree naps
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Watt Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Every line of your haiku trio brings a delight. I love "a bejeweled perfumed bride" in spring and taking a nap in fall. I do enjoy your seasonal writes ~ John
Staton Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Very nicely written! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Awesome trio of haikus, Andrea.
Talwar Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 9:21 PM
I've no words to describe such an amazing work You are truly gifted.its so pictorial.
Wolves Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Wonderful description of seasons change
Duet Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Well, I love trees and I love this little haiku, Andrea. Beautiful!
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Andrea, you capture so much with so little... I love "bejeweled perfumed bride" and "beneath my tree’s sombrero". Congratulations, well-deserved ~ John
Smith Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations Andrea...
La France Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Andrea, big CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this beauty~
Scars Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:00 PM
lovely haiku Andrea :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Hendrickson Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 12:22 AM
That imagery....It's powerful...
A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:31 PM
only you can give so much imagery. summer was my fav
Jones Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Every line so easily imagined! Congratulations Andrea ...
Anglesey Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Andrea, this is a glowing portrayal in the seasons of a tree..."a bejeweled perfumed bride" ... the poem is perfectly written with artful imagery...Congrats on your win:)
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Andrea I so loved these Haiku. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Delaney Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Hi Andrea I love the way you have given each season such beauty.......someday you may add a winter tree Awesome and congratulations SuZ
May Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 9:42 AM
very nice haiku Andrea....congrats on your win
A  Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 10:56 PM
congrats on your awesome win............. SKAT
A   Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Andrea.. Congratulations, thank you ever so much... I was very happy with all the poems entered in my TREE contest :-). Please enjoy my blog, I sure did... LOL--- always~ Linda
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 4:16 PM
A mystical fantasy journeying through your haiku writes. Light & Love
Phookan Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Andrea, such lovely verse,,'bejewelled perfumed bride','beneath tree's sombrero grass breathes' and the fall one..Ooooh every piece has been artistically done.Many Congrats on your wonderful win Andrea.love, gautami
Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Good to see the placement for this quality write Andrea,and all the best..
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:23 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Osita Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved win in P.D's contest
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