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My Tree's Seasons

spring wakens my tree -
a bejeweled perfumed bride. . . .
love birds make their nest

summer’s yellowed lawn
beneath my tree’s sombrero. . . . 
grass breathes sweet relief

fall’s quick change artist -
from green to gold to crimson. . . . 
disrobed, my tree naps

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John Watt

Date: 5/14/2020 2:12:00 PM

Every line of your haiku trio brings a delight. I love "a bejeweled perfumed bride" in spring and taking a nap in fall. I do enjoy your seasonal writes ~ John

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:35:00 AM

Very nicely written! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/13/2018 9:00:00 PM

Awesome trio of haikus, Andrea.

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/20/2017 9:21:00 PM

I've no words to describe such an amazing work You are truly gifted.its so pictorial.

Running Wolves

Date: 3/7/2017 9:33:00 AM

Wonderful description of seasons change

Carole Duet

Date: 10/6/2016 8:31:00 PM

Well, I love trees and I love this little haiku, Andrea. Beautiful!

John Watt

Date: 10/1/2016 12:17:00 PM

Andrea, you capture so much with so little... I love "bejeweled perfumed bride" and "beneath my tree’s sombrero". Congratulations, well-deserved ~ John

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/1/2016 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea...

Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 1:20:00 PM

Andrea, big CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this beauty~

Beautiful Scars

Date: 9/30/2016 1:00:00 PM

lovely haiku Andrea :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Steve Hendrickson

Date: 5/15/2016 12:22:00 AM

That imagery....It's powerful...

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:31:00 PM

only you can give so much imagery. summer was my fav

Donna Jones

Date: 7/21/2013 5:39:00 PM

Every line so easily imagined! Congratulations Andrea ...

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/12/2013 5:56:00 PM

Andrea, this is a glowing portrayal in the seasons of a tree..."a bejeweled perfumed bride" ... the poem is perfectly written with artful imagery...Congrats on your win:)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/12/2013 5:55:00 PM

Andrea I so loved these Haiku. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/12/2013 10:58:00 AM

Hi Andrea I love the way you have given each season such beauty.......someday you may add a winter tree Awesome and congratulations SuZ

Joseph May

Date: 7/12/2013 9:42:00 AM

very nice haiku Andrea....congrats on your win

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2013 10:56:00 PM

congrats on your awesome win............. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2013 10:14:00 PM

Andrea.. Congratulations, thank you ever so much... I was very happy with all the poems entered in my TREE contest :-). Please enjoy my blog, I sure did... LOL--- always~ Linda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 4:16:00 PM

A mystical fantasy journeying through your haiku writes. Light & Love

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/10/2011 2:47:00 PM

Andrea, such lovely verse,,'bejewelled perfumed bride','beneath tree's sombrero grass breathes' and the fall one..Ooooh every piece has been artistically done.Many Congrats on your wonderful win Andrea.love, gautami