My Tree and I

The birds have flown up and gone
They have built their own nests
On the trees of the alien lands.
My tree is lonely and leafless.
We look at each other my tree and I
And hear the sounds of winds and trees.

There was a time when
We never heard other sounds,
Except that of our children
Now we hear our own footsteps.
We dine in complete silence
The food containers are full.

Oh, the joys of summer days,
The days for the birds to return,
With their own selves extended,
Feeling the house with laughs & cries.
We look at each other my tree and I.

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The poem was written while travelling from Detroit to Denver on 2-10-05 after passing happy 
days with kids and grandkids.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Dr. Ram Such a wonderfully creative write. I like you you compared birds and children. We all have to let our little ones take flight and leave the nest. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Missed Poem write
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 10:55 PM
I enjoyed this read very much. Lovely poem.
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 7:31 AM
great poem..!!!! adding to my favs, thxs
Tapley Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 9:03 PM
This was really superb! The thought of your tree made me think of a strong woman, one that knows what she wants and loves her mate. I loved the ending and how all the little birds come back home with their own treasure of little ones. This was really an excellent poem.
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April 28, 2010 at 8:15 AM
such a beauty-Charma.
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 9:25 AM
I like your reference to your children as bird leaving ther tree. Such is life but we always yearn to have them back in the nest. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Joyce
Jaye Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Hello Dr. Ram Mehta I want to say Thank you for reading my poetry, It really means a lot to me to hear someone else's thoughts on my work. I enjoyed reading My tree an I, I have always gravitatied to poems about nature, I wrote a few poems about nature I look forward to reading more of your poetry take care, and god bless Patricia Jaye.
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 4:35 PM
I still miss my children being here...There is so much activity and sound when children are there...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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April 25, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Well done enjoyed, p.d.
Strand Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Interesting Ram how a journey can help our reflections.It has often happened to me.Rgds Brian
Murphy Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 11:31 AM
very nice enjoyed and thanks so much for your love and support of my poetry faleshia
Flach Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Nicely penned. One I can empathize with. Well done.
Pickett Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Wonderful poem here my friend... I liked it very much....:JP]
Chamma Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:10 AM
A poignant poem. A touch of sadness. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Farah
Stella Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:56 AM
this is cute and should be in a childrens book loved the imagery in this one thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my works keep up the great writing enjoyed the read blessings to you and family
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