My Tree and I

The birds have flown up and gone
They have built their own nests
On the trees of the alien lands.
My tree is lonely and leafless.
We look at each other my tree and I
And hear the sounds of winds and trees.

There was a time when
We never heard other sounds,
Except that of our children
Now we hear our own footsteps.
We dine in complete silence
The food containers are full.

Oh, the joys of summer days,
The days for the birds to return,
With their own selves extended,
Feeling the house with laughs & cries.
We look at each other my tree and I.

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The poem was written while travelling from Detroit to Denver on 2-10-05 after passing happy 
days with kids and grandkids.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/12/2014 8:27:00 AM
Dr. Ram Such a wonderfully creative write. I like you you compared birds and children. We all have to let our little ones take flight and leave the nest. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Missed Poem write
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:55:00 PM
I enjoyed this read very much. Lovely poem.
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:31:00 AM
great poem..!!!! adding to my favs, thxs
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:03:00 PM
This was really superb! The thought of your tree made me think of a strong woman, one that knows what she wants and loves her mate. I loved the ending and how all the little birds come back home with their own treasure of little ones. This was really an excellent poem.
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:15:00 AM
such a beauty-Charma.
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:25:00 AM
I like your reference to your children as bird leaving ther tree. Such is life but we always yearn to have them back in the nest. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2010 5:53:00 AM
Hello Dr. Ram Mehta I want to say Thank you for reading my poetry, It really means a lot to me to hear someone else's thoughts on my work. I enjoyed reading My tree an I, I have always gravitatied to poems about nature, I wrote a few poems about nature I look forward to reading more of your poetry take care, and god bless Patricia Jaye.
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Date: 4/26/2010 4:35:00 PM
I still miss my children being here...There is so much activity and sound when children are there...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
Well done enjoyed, p.d.
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:16:00 AM
Interesting Ram how a journey can help our reflections.It has often happened to me.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/24/2010 11:31:00 AM
very nice enjoyed and thanks so much for your love and support of my poetry faleshia
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:07:00 AM
Nicely penned. One I can empathize with. Well done.
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Date: 4/24/2010 8:32:00 AM
Wonderful poem here my friend... I liked it very much....:JP]
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:10:00 AM
A poignant poem. A touch of sadness. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Farah
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:56:00 AM
this is cute and should be in a childrens book loved the imagery in this one thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my works keep up the great writing enjoyed the read blessings to you and family
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