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My Treasure

You are one in a million-- something that is hard to find. The greatest thing I always wanted, In a depth of earth I wanna burried. Your love is so divine, Divine I can't define. If love spells L-O-V-E... Teach me well of ABC's.-- Through land I'll travel far. By air, I soar up high. In the sea,I dive so deep, just to ensure a treasure would keep. For the soul you have killed, For the breath you have gripped. Even a bit of mercy hasn't left. Only river of tears flow in my shelf. So now my Valentino, Take the last step to inferno, A key was thrown over the rainbow.. Good bye ,my treasure..my Boo!

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Date: 4/7/2017 3:17:00 PM
So creatively penned Aiyah :-) Endings are the beginning of possibilities...your words convey clearly the unworthiness of another and the last line is just great! Wonderful writing. blessings xxx lynn
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Date: 1/24/2014 6:00:00 PM
Aiyah What an interesting and creative write. Full of passion and love. I could feel the devotion flowing from your heart onto the page. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Good Enough poem.
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Date: 12/9/2013 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful dedication to that heartfelt one of yours, AiyaH. Deeply expressed, with feelings honestly broken down in this piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/9/2013 12:27:00 PM
Thank U for the appreciation my Dear frienD =) .. i'll check out of your hidden treasures,, :).. thanks for the visit! <3 :')
Date: 12/6/2013 4:18:00 PM
- A beautiful poem that ends with a goodbye - Well done,Aiyah. - Have a great weekend my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/6/2013 11:21:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise :) have a great weekend,too!!one love from Pinas <3 _AiyaH

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