Sara Kendrick Poet Pantoum

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My Tiger Stripes

My tiger stripes contrast bright blue
Those butterflies dance to their own tune
Silly butterflies entice me true
Butterflies let's dance 'til the new moon

Those butterflies dance to their own tune
Flit and flutter upon the wind
Butterflies let's dance 'til the new moon
Upon agile paws whirling spin

Flit and flutter upon the wind
Silly butterflies entice me true
Upon agile paws whirling spin
Where tiger stripes contrast bright blue  

Personification Pantoum
Kitten And Butterflies
Written: March 11, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 11:58 PM Sara, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda

Timothy Hicks March 20, 2016 at 10:20 PM I still find the tiger stripes cute the second go around. Congrats on the win!

Beautiful Scars March 20, 2016 at 9:47 AM Sara, congrats on your win! -luloo

James Inman March 19, 2016 at 11:00 PM Lovely, lovely poem Sara.

Vladislav Raven March 19, 2016 at 8:52 PM Hi Sara, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I have to go along with the Love of the tiger stripes Sara. A beautiful read that can give such peace to the reader. Nicely crafted Sara. I Love the imagery expressed. This is definitely a seven in my book....Vlad.

Jan Allison March 19, 2016 at 4:27 PM I especially love your tiger stripes congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper March 19, 2016 at 4:24 PM Sara,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve

Timothy Hicks March 13, 2016 at 9:52 PM Tiger stripes contrasting bright blue ... excellent line to begin and end the pantoum with. I like the pantoum, but I don't try it very often. On one or two I actually changed the repetitions slightly ... sort of 50/50 on whether or not it's smart to do that or not. It's a fun form. Butterflies and kittens ...? My mind goes blank for the contest. Lol.

Daniel Turner March 11, 2016 at 6:35 PM Now that I know what a pantoum is I can say. Good job, Sara. Good luck in contest.Peace young lady:) Sara Kendrick March 12, 2016 at 5:42 AM Youth is forever contained within our spirit even though our bodies age with time..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Casarah Nance March 11, 2016 at 6:14 PM aww.. cute and cuddly pictures and words. :) very good Sara Kendrick March 12, 2016 at 5:42 AM I just enjoyed seeing those pictures as well..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2016 at 2:22 PM - What a beautiful poem, dear Sara ...... and adorable pictures - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick March 12, 2016 at 5:46 AM Anne Lise, Thanks for the well wishes for the week end..Hairy has barked for three nights now starting around midnight on..He did not understand that it is Saturday morning and we need to sleep a little later..We might have to silence that dog..Sara