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My tiger stripes contrast bright blue Those butterflies dance to their own tune Silly butterflies entice me true Butterflies let's dance 'til the new moon Those butterflies dance to their own tune Flit and flutter upon the wind Butterflies let's dance 'til the new moon Upon agile paws whirling spin Flit and flutter upon the wind Silly butterflies entice me true Upon agile paws whirling spin Where tiger stripes contrast bright blue Personification Pantoum Kitten And Butterflies Written: March 11, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2016 11:58:00 PM

Sara, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/20/2016 10:20:00 PM

I still find the tiger stripes cute the second go around. Congrats on the win!

Lu Loo

Date: 3/20/2016 9:47:00 AM

Sara, congrats on your win! -luloo

James Inman

Date: 3/19/2016 11:00:00 PM

Lovely, lovely poem Sara.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/19/2016 8:52:00 PM

Hi Sara, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I have to go along with the Love of the tiger stripes Sara. A beautiful read that can give such peace to the reader. Nicely crafted Sara. I Love the imagery expressed. This is definitely a seven in my book....Vlad.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2016 4:27:00 PM

I especially love your tiger stripes congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/19/2016 4:24:00 PM

Sara,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/13/2016 9:52:00 PM

Tiger stripes contrasting bright blue ... excellent line to begin and end the pantoum with. I like the pantoum, but I don't try it very often. On one or two I actually changed the repetitions slightly ... sort of 50/50 on whether or not it's smart to do that or not. It's a fun form. Butterflies and kittens ...? My mind goes blank for the contest. Lol.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/11/2016 6:35:00 PM

Now that I know what a pantoum is I can say. Good job, Sara. Good luck in contest.Peace young lady:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2016 5:42:00 AM

Youth is forever contained within our spirit even though our bodies age with time..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2016 6:14:00 PM

aww.. cute and cuddly pictures and words. :) very good

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2016 5:42:00 AM

I just enjoyed seeing those pictures as well..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2016 2:22:00 PM

- What a beautiful poem, dear Sara ...... and adorable pictures - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2016 5:46:00 AM

Anne Lise, Thanks for the well wishes for the week end..Hairy has barked for three nights now starting around midnight on..He did not understand that it is Saturday morning and we need to sleep a little later..We might have to silence that dog..Sara