My Ties To Reality Have Been Severed

Sitting here thinking and searching my mind For new ways to say I love you The most daunting task you can ever imagine But I really don't think we need to A simple “I love you” has always been uttered In the heat of a passionate embrace No matter, if you're saying, “The world is ending” Or “I've travelled from outer space” No one takes heed while consumed by the act Of passionate intense lovemaking You're literally transported to another dimension And everything else is forsaken Had a sweet dream that we both were bound Locked in each other's arms forever What a beautiful conclusion to life here on earth Seems my ties with reality I've severed Though it seems my fantasy world is exactly that I still feel the thrill of your touch Just have to close my eyes and there you are Oh how I love you so much

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Date: 2/7/2023 12:27:00 PM
LOVE IT Love it LOVE it...... Keep those ties severed Jack, reality aint what its cracked up to be.. Fantasy and dreamin keeps the heart fluttering ( and you do it so well).
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2023 3:54:00 PM
Need you to keep me thinking about love! Since you've become my very special Aussie lady can't think of anything else! Wait to see your name on my screen daily! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 2/7/2023 10:49:00 AM
...a little lovey dovey ... a little hanky panky...a kitchen dance...pancakes
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2023 11:01:00 AM
LOL Chuckles galore! Cheers my friend!
Date: 2/7/2023 7:18:00 AM
You've got it bad Jack but nothing wrong with a bit of lovey dovey. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2023 7:32:00 AM
It's all a bit of high faulting' memory! Wish it was true! LOL What a life eh!!!
Date: 2/7/2023 4:05:00 AM
A big wow! She’s bound to be swept off her feet with this one, heart all aflutter
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2023 4:10:00 AM
Now that you mention it... that she was... in my other world! LOL
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