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My Thoughts On Silence

Embracing silence as my friend has often saved my sanity. I realized its benefits. The adages seemed right for me: Silence is golden. It nourishes wisdom and courage emboldens. It is its own language. Life as I knew it soon would end, for silence brought me to my knees, no longer golden, nor my friend, but stunning, stark reality. When did his love for me begin to wane? I can’t be sure how long he feigned affection to be kind. I know respect for me was strong. One night I whispered, “I love you.” His tear-filled eyes avoided mine. The silence said a sad “good-bye.” I lied: “Don’t worry. I’ll be fine!” I don’t need silence. I need him to come and save my sanity. I miss the benefits of love and noise; all seem so right for me. Fiction September 2, 2020 Contest: Song I--Cold, Quiet Now Poetry Contest placed 2nd Sponsor: Rob Carmack received HM in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice, 3

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Date: 9/23/2020 9:33:00 PM
congratulations, Janice ,on your win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 9/23/2020 9:01:00 PM
A fiction we have all lived through at some point or will ... Moving write. Much congratulations on your top win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jeanne. Janice
Date: 9/23/2020 5:49:00 PM
Janice, the succinct telling of heart's bloodshed is astounding. I admire your raw depiction of complex relationships and their often mysterious demise. A well earned Top Win. Brilliant Congratulations, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/23/2020 6:40:00 PM
Sigrid, THANK YOU so much! Janice
Date: 9/23/2020 5:15:00 PM
Been a while since I have had you in one of my contests, good to have you back.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/23/2020 5:51:00 PM
Rob, THANK YOU so much for sponsoring and for my win!:-) Janice
Date: 9/3/2020 5:34:00 PM
Ooh, Janice. What a profound write as you pen the transformation of silence from friend to foe. Superb contest entry. Here's to a big win! Calm Karma, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/3/2020 5:37:00 PM
Gershon, thank you for this great compliment to my poem! Janice
Date: 9/3/2020 3:06:00 AM
Sadly Janice it wasn't to be, a sad verse of lost love. Well written Janice and good luck. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/3/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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