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My Thoughts On Aging

"Old" can just sit and wait for me Because I'm not ready yet. There's just too much to do and see, Too many goals not met. I can ignore all the aches and pains, Pretend they're just not there. I need to go sailing while sunset wanes And play while the weather is fair. I don't have time for this aging thing, It's really not for me. I've too many songs I've yet to sing And too many places to be. Yes, "Old" will just have to wait awhile, There's still too much to do. Tho' it beckons to me, I have to smile, I still feel like I'm "new". So "Old" can just sit and wait for me Because I'm on my way, But I'm really in no hurry you see, So maybe I'll get there "one day".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/15/2020 6:54:00 PM
This should be tacked on every wall in every Elderly Care Facility!! Terrific!!
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Date: 4/28/2010 10:17:00 PM
Yeah, I LOVED this. I have always felt you are only as old as you want to be and I want to be a kid forever. I am having too much fun to grow up. This was excellent!
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:37:00 AM
There is absolutely nothing wrong to live life in a balance way to the full, but this aging thing will come to all of us at some point. I however like the message you portrait in your poem, and if you ask me we are as young as we feel really. nice poem
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Date: 4/13/2010 6:43:00 PM
I love it! I'm onle 21, soon to be 22 & this whole aging process can wait! I've got much to much living left to do, and your poem reminded me of that!:)
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:58:00 PM
Excellent write about the road we all must travel Francine.. make every day count is my motto in life... turn them all into good days even when they start out wrong.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight and appreciate your lovely comments too..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:37:00 PM
Great write about aging...With the attitude of keep going, enjoying life, and ignoring the little aches and pains old age will have a hard time catching up with you..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:38:00 AM
Something we don't look forward to...lol...great write and thank you for the encouraging words on my poetry also.
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM
How lucky I am to have discovered your poetry, Francine!...I am 61 but still 21 in my heart and mind and hope to always stay that way...I think if I ever forget that and 'give in'...then I will SURLY turn into a helpless old fool!...Thanks for the kind comment...So you enjoy a shot of Mr. Cuervo now and then too? - Tim
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:37:00 PM
very nice write loved it and thank you for all your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:51:00 PM
going to my favs!! My new theme for life!! Old will have to wait!!
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:59:00 AM
you asked Andrea, so I will tell, I am 54, but when I go out and party on a Friday night my youngest bemoans that I "have a life" and she doesn't.
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:37:00 AM
Lovely rhyme Francine, i'm only 49 - and yes there is too much to do >> James
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:31:00 AM
I am 75 and I agree with you
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:13:00 PM
hmmm, now how old ARE you, my dear? I sit here with a burning shoulder, something I never used to get before age 50. GRRRRRR. Good one, LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:38:00 PM
Very Good one Francine......Larry
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