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Life led by the thoughts of another...will never be your own

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Karen Croft

Date: 9/14/2024 6:11:00 PM

This is so true!

Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 9/30/2022 12:51:00 PM

Bitter truth, full of wisdom. Great!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/12/2022 4:07:00 AM

Excellent words my dear sister. I love how they flow and the impact of the message. i am very proud of you. Blessings always!

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 7/12/2022 7:13:00 AM

Thank you for your very kind words Joseph. I wish I had the energy and mind to write poetry again. I think of you all often. Love and Blessings always, Carol

Sekitto Herbert Grace

Date: 6/23/2021 1:01:00 AM

It's true. I love this piece

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/23/2020 5:32:00 AM

Life led by the thoughts of another...will never be your own/// exactly right; thoughtful; we need to control our minds; if we give other the mind then we easily controlled by them, we'll be hypnotized easily as like the TV remote controller ......the mind of TV exists in Remote Controller and TV is directed my R.M......so if we learn to control our minds then it'll be easy to know own-self and those who know own-self is wise.

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2020 6:49:00 AM

So True and so profound...such words of wisdom. I think of you often, my dear friend and hope you are well and safe in these trying time. Love you forever, ~ Elaine

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/6/2019 10:25:00 AM

Carol, I like this poem. But where did our Sunshine go...? -Richard

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/26/2019 9:06:00 AM

Wonderful, very profound and oh so true.

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/11/2018 3:33:00 PM

Beautiful Carol. Sure miss your Sunshine here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2018 8:15:00 PM

That is GOOD, CArol. Gosh, I am seeing lots of monoku around here. Am I missing a new contest??

Mick Talbot

Date: 11/17/2017 7:26:00 PM

The truth often hurts but one must move on. I had written word very similar to yours but yours are far more succinct, thank you for sharing! :)

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/21/2017 5:56:00 PM

Not a lengthy write, Carol, but so very true. Huggable thoughts!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/19/2017 1:40:00 PM

A great poem simply said a volume. Loved always my dear lovely friend, bl

Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 2/5/2017 8:40:00 AM

We need to think this few powerful words. Great writers , their words are like them.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/16/2017 3:11:00 PM

Amen my friend. To Thine Own Self Be True. You cannot be what others think you should be. You can try but only for a time. The real you comes out sooner or later. You will only be truly happy if you accept yourself and be who and what you are. Great job. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 6:58:00 AM

Great wisdom in these few words. Smiles!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/2/2016 3:48:00 AM

How very true you are "Life led by the thoughts of another...will never be your own" Great thought from you dear friend Carol. I miss you a lot on PS. With lots of Good wishes and love for you and your family today and always.....Ravindra K Kapoor

Frankey Lame

Date: 7/12/2016 11:17:00 AM

Beautiful writing. FIZ

James Tate

Date: 7/6/2016 4:20:00 PM

It takes skill to say it succinctly. Good job.

John Long

Date: 6/14/2016 12:21:00 PM

That's probably two pages or more, as a document. And it's excellent, but it seems more worthy of being a story. Persistence pays off, so keep it up!

John Long

Date: 6/14/2016 12:19:00 PM

It's so short. But I like it! Keep up the poetry writing!