My Thoughts

Magnificent stone Surrounds me in mystique here I am overwhelmed Water has spilled here Lavishing the brilliant stone Smiling as I watch Contemplative soul Filled with natures gifts to me I will not grow old Written by R.M. Hunt a.k.a Robert Matthew Hunt for "Your Thoughts" contest Won 1st place:D

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2011 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/28/2011 5:50:00 AM

wonderful contemplations write Matt. Congratulations to you on this win.

Joseph Osita

Date: 5/25/2011 2:01:00 AM

Congrats on your big win with this amazing write!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/23/2011 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations....I tried to think of something....but when I noticed Michael was not 103 years of age as I had him pictured...I said, "whoa"....let me dismiss myself...and it's a good thing...after reading your stunning poetry.....it's really great poetry..Thank you....

Matt Hunt
Date: 5/23/2011 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Matt. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 7:37:00 PM

ALLRIGHT, now I see what you mean. you didn't just win, you won BIG. Way to go, Matt. You so deserved this! Congratulations, my friend.

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/22/2011 2:35:00 PM

Thank you all so much for the congrats:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 12:10:00 PM

Beautiful interpretation of Michael's photo, Matt. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats Matt on your big win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 8:08:00 AM

super congrats Matt on your first place win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write luv.. so honored to be sharing first place with u..enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of michael, Matt

Cory Long

Date: 5/22/2011 6:56:00 AM

congrats on your first place win. cory

James Foulk

Date: 5/14/2011 6:28:00 PM

enjoyed reading this one, thank you for commentint on Days of dreams.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2011 11:44:00 PM

I really like the personal touch you gave to this one. I wish I had thought of such an approach. I have not been able to think of anything yet to do for that contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 2:59:00 PM

wow! awesome haikus... the greatest... deep thoughts... and dangerous if you think on it.. have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 5/6/2011 2:07:00 PM

Nice write R.M(:

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2011 5:40:00 AM

Wonderful entry with this philosophical expressions, R.M.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/6/2011 2:06:00 AM

Well written. I am not a MASSIVE fan of Haiku (there are so many bad ones out there!), but you have worked the genre well here. I think they often work better when linked together, as you have done. You have made a few words go a long way! Well done! Regards, Robert. PS--Thanks for visiting and reading some of my work.