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My Tender Heart

B eautiful daughters C aptivated my heart. D eep in my soul. E vermore a part. F orever I love you G rowing more each day. H ow you've changed me I find hard to say. J ust being with you K eeps me young. L et me hold you. M y little ones. N ow you are leaving O ne by one. P romise never to Q uestion your Mum's R eserve of true love S hould you need me. T ender is my heart. U nder stress of losing U 3.

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Date: 9/26/2016 5:31:00 PM
Beautiful write JEAN
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/26/2016 6:59:00 PM
OMG Seosamh, it is they who are beautiful. Such pure, unadultrated, radiating souls considering the pain our breakup inflicted.
Date: 9/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
Jean, a precious write about your daughters. So endearing. Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/16/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Kim for giving me the opportunity of revealing my love for them.
Date: 9/6/2016 8:50:00 AM
Hopefully, your 'empty nest syndrome' is eased by regular visits from them, Jean. Good luck in the contest, Viv x
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:18:00 AM
So far, so good Viv. I'm just back from Oslo, and far from an empty nest, two of them are back from Dublin already.
Date: 9/2/2016 11:18:00 PM
Brought tears to me eyes! :) hugs!
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Date: 9/3/2016 12:16:00 AM
Me too Arthur.They are the reason I know what love is.
Date: 9/2/2016 3:40:00 PM
I think many can relate to your poem Jean but we have to let them spread their wings and fly but it is very hard:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/2/2016 9:43:00 AM
I'm touched. Going empty nest? Remember how blessed they are to be able to and capable of flying! Love can feel so bittersweet, eh? Enjoyed your poem ... CayCay
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Date: 9/2/2016 10:14:00 AM
You have hit the nail on the head CayCay.
Date: 9/2/2016 8:38:00 AM
Damn Jean Now you're making me cry. A beautiful tribute to your beautiful daughters. I'm sure they know how lucky they are to have a mum like you.
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/2/2016 10:10:00 AM
Don't worry Daniel.....I cried too.

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