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My Tahitian Beauty

In the crystal clear waters Surrounded by a lush lagoon A beauty bathes I'm in heavenly swoon Her curvaceous shape Reflects back to me Her long brown hair Flowing so free Her wetted body In luring moist glow Entices my soul In bodily grow As she wades through the waters Her body flows Shaped and tanned Natures bestowed She exits the lagoon As the water cascades My Tahitian beauty In her bathing parade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 11/15/2009 5:03:00 AM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Very descriptive. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2009 8:58:00 PM
Woo Hoo James..Tell it man!! Very enjoyable...Marty
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Date: 11/13/2009 8:28:00 PM
Got a eyeful in this descriptive piece.. and Tahiti sounds like a lovely island to me.. I felt like I could see the lagoon .. your stories are breathtaking ... very good rhyme too, Mr. Highlander... happy u shared tonight ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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