My Swoon

I'm back 
with an attack
on mankind
a civil act
an act of kindness
a greeting 
or cheating
on death itself
my heart- stoped beating
for ever in seeing
I can't break in 
I won't break out
got nothing to live for
but nothing to doubt 
life itself took a piss on me
individuality
nothing now 
can take me down
'cause I'm on the bottom
of this living drought
If there is anything- I can explain
is I will never back down 
and come out of my sane
so break me down- break me out
you can't win over me
ONLY BEAT ME DOWN!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 6:26 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Ryan. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 3:39 PM
rough day??
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